相信所有交卷的六级考生都想对出题者说一句话:草泥马
这道题已经和多年前的“不说不的重要性”有的一拼了。大学英语四六级和考研的命题一般走两个方向:社会热点话题和永恒话题。热点话题不大可能是当年最热门话题,不然形同泄题。一定要给本次BT题目定性的话,题材属于永恒话题(就是啥时候都可以考),体裁属于对比观点选择题。(一般对六级作文的分法是:社会热点,图表,对比观点选择和应用文。) 鉴于在课堂的第五节课详细介绍了对比观点选择题的写法,在此就不以BT对BT了,按照课堂套路,简单的来分析下本次文章。
On the importance of a name
1有人认为名字很重要 2也有人认为无关紧要, 3我认为
结构模式化
这种体裁的文章三段式是可以接受的,但是加入一个引入段效果更好,第一段引入关于人们对于名字的不同态度,属于提出问题段。二三两段详细从正反两方面分析人们的看法,属于分析问题段。最后一段简单谈谈自己的看法。注意二三两段主体段要有引导性的主题句。
语言要包装
语言方面,一是扬长,二是避短
扬长:如果有自己的经典句,再这么绕也要用上自己的经典句,注意这是你最拿得出手的而且是绝对正确的句子
避短:如果是临场发挥的话,如果你的语言基础不是太好的话,请保持宁简勿烂的原则,在中国,无论你玩多么高超的语法现象,错了就扣分,所以宁可弱智也别错,这样虽然找不到加分的理由,但是绝对找不到扣分的理由
另外注意要语言多变性。以这次作文中有人“认为”也有人“认为”,我“认为”的“认为”为例,根据课堂分析,可以写为think, say, point out, argue, maintain, hold the perspective that, believe, I am convinced that等不同写法
思路简单化
四六级作文以结构语言为主,降低自己思维的难度,更加有利于考生发挥自己有限的英文水平。值得注意的是:本文并没有说是人的姓名,那么人名,地名,商品名。。都可以是分析的范畴。
卷面要整洁
这一点已经不用再解释了,齐头式,字稍大,少涂改,是卷面的王道
下面提供简单文章一篇(很多网站给出无数装B文章,写的跟GRE差不多,无数学生看了说完了,我连人家范文都看不懂,是不是挂了?我只想说,要写GRE范文请去GRE板块,六级是什么要求就写什么文章)
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that the importance of a name is a prevalent and pervasive issue with which we are all confronted. There is no consensus of opinions among people concerning the controversial issue.
Some people hold the perspective that a name plays an irreplaceable role in our life. On the one hand, they point out that a beautiful and meaningful name, to some extent, could exert a far-reaching influence on a person’s fate. On the other hand, they argue that an attractive brand name can lay a solid foundation for the company profits.
Others, however, hold the negative view. According to this group of people, a name is just a way of calling things and people. Besides, a name has no relationship with a man’s life and fate, for the reason that it is our persistence and painstaking efforts that determine our life.
From my perspective, I am convinced that a good name is a positive exterior factor for success. However, great emphasis should be placed upon the interior quality. Only by attaching considerable importance to the essence under a name can we survive and thrive in our society.
全文194字,已经超过需要,随意较少几个句子就是标准的170字 黑体字部分为课堂曾经介绍过的经典写法和句式
考完了好好放松一会吧!努力过的人,奇迹就会发生。我对此深信不疑
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